Today I'm going to tell about a piece of work that I'm proud of and that's a persuading piece of writing to get James Russell's books placed into our school library and into our classes. Here's my writing down below.
Dear Mrs Shrestha,
I am trying to convince you to buy all of James Russell’s books.
Firstly, this great author came into our school and made some effort to spend some time with us, so we should be super grateful to him. He explained to us how his books were but I think that he has an interesting story of how he became an author.
We need these books in our library. We are keen to have these books because they are interesting, adventurous and great to read about. Don't you like these books? Mrs Sherstha, please buy these books. We are really interested to get our minds into it. By purchasing these books we can make the school even better at reading.
Last of all we should buy these books because we need new books in the library! We haven't bought some new books for about 4 months! So these should be the new books we should buy.
Without a doubt I know you will buy these books and I hope you will (by the way I'm not demanding you to do it).
Yours sincerely,
Jamal
She responded to my writing which is great and now its your turn to respond to my writing again so please leave a comment :)
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